just a little something

Hello, I'm xXAERXx and I'm going to be critiquing on behalf of Team #37 of let's begin, shall we?

First of all, I think this was a very creative way to show off your drawing. I also love the cute little smile on the girl, it really gives off a cute aura the bunny ears on her right hand were also a nice edition, along with the Artsy! Sign on top. I think it really goes along well in this picture. I also love how the hair is a bit messy. It only makes this picture more cute! ~

Now on a more critical note, though, there are still some errors on this piece, as cute as it is. Because this looks as though it were meant to be a chibi, I won't comment on the anatomy. However, I can't help but notice that the right arm is a bit longer than the left it's pretty noticeable, so I recommend you fix it ^_^

 I think you should also try to start drawing fingers, as well. The old circle hands just don't look as nice as fingers do these days. I also think that the left hand is a bit smaller than the right xD (from my perspective of right and left sorry I didn't say this earlier Q-Q) even for a chibi, though, the torso is a bit too long, and I think you should try to draw lines where the knees are a bit, so your legs don't look that stiff :3

I also see some problems with the face, and these include:
-The eyebrows don't visibly end on the face, and it kind of looks like a unibrow :S Eyebrows usually end about at the in side of the eye (the part facing the nose)
-The balloon seems to be floating in place without anything holding it down o.o try to draw maybe a weight on the balloon or something holding it down, to make it look a bit more realistic ^^
-Just a tip, but I see you cut The feet off. I highly suggest you never cut anything off in your artwork, as it gives some people the impression that you're being lazy
-The right eye (again from my perspective) doesn't start where it should under the hair. It kind of looks as if she has no right eye, which is a bit creepy
-Try adding more details (folds, wrinkles) to the clothes. It will make everything look a lot less stiff and more flowing, like everything in real life is
-I think you should give a go at shading your drawings a bit more :L don't be afraid to try it!~
-Try to look for any white spaces in your coloring and fill them in. White spaces like that give your picture a sense of haste and messiness, an we don't want that. Also, try to color inside the lines

Here, I found some links to help you
Clothes/Folds And Wrinkles: [link]
Anatomy: [link] Take a look at them, it may help a lot ^^
Speed Drawing: [link]
I suggest you take a look at all of these links

So overall, this is a very cute drawing with only minor errors I'm sure if you take all this advice into consideration, you'll become a very great chibi artist
Good luck!